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Barefoot Off to school and then go barefoot, in the 50s running wild, Elvis was singing blue suede shoes, Used to listen all the time. Bare foot out a playing football, kicking, stinging poor old foot. Bindi’s, Goatheads , sometimes stinging, Ignore the pain an counter, boot. Bare foot rolling in the black mud. Parents couldn’t tell to call , were we black or whiter kids. Mud covered as it did, mud covered us all. Francines' Barefoot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/11/2011 8:06:00 AM
Great poem Don hun congrats on your HM xxx Tracie
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:41:00 PM
I just loved the meaning behind those last two lines, Don. Congrats on the HM,my friend.
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Don
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Don. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats DON on your grand win with this great entry and write luv.. enjoy speical honor just for u...wow..
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:01:00 AM
congrats on your in in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:37:00 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest Don with this lovely reminiscence
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:12:00 PM
this is very fun to read. I loved the references to things from 50's. I think you must have been running all over the place,like I was too!!
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Date: 6/6/2011 11:10:00 PM
Yes Andrea, Back when life was less complicated, everything seemed to work, Yes we made our own fun, Tom Mix at the pictures , fighting bad guys and mc gurk. Different world then... xo Don
Date: 6/5/2011 3:23:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..I like your way of thinking that my work about the mirage should be a Ballard that one could sing..Thanks for stopping by....Sara
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:50:00 PM
The best of luck here in this foot of a walk entry.. Nice job,,, i'm also sending soup mail.... p.d.
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:31:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. My mother always said it looked like we kids belonged to the blackfoot indian tribe. Mike
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