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Bare Weeping Willows

Bare Weeping Willows Graceful exposed limbs drip tears Lake filled to its brim Eerily fog coats isle's trees Who sigh for birds southward flown Sponsor: Nathan_______~~D Contest: Tanka(season)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/24/2012 5:01:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 3:19:00 PM

Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:16:00 PM

WOW, big congrats to you on this stunning win, my friend. GREAT imagery!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/24/2012 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win with this inspired piece. Love, Joyce

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/24/2012 10:42:00 AM

Wow, Sarah!...What a beauty this is!...second line 'limbs drip tears' is exquisite...Congratulations...well deserved win - Tim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/24/2012 5:29:00 AM

Wow! Yes, perfect lines, indeed! This tanka is just wonderful! Very special congratulations for a very special first winner, Sara! (^_^) Love, Hanitra!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/24/2012 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara, a worthy win here sweetheart xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 11:51:00 PM

CONGRATS SARA ON AN EXCITING FIRST PLACE WIN LUV .. PERFECT LINES

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 6:47:00 PM

SARA, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/23/2012 6:46:00 PM

A lovely and melancholy poem, Sara! Congratulations on a fine write!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 1:09:00 AM

I really like the feeling of weeping and falling water that this one portrays.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2012 2:32:00 PM

Wow, Sara, you have created a masterful write here my friend! I really enjoyed every line and every piece of this delightful poem! This is a powerfully worded write, full of ideas of the Fall and everything that is included therein! I loved this piece, Great Work!!