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Bardo

I take two long seconds to watch my breath rattle the snow brittle and sweet. I don't want to leave and I am so scared of losing. the kettle sings and we turn the pages. even in despair, you burn and I can't imagine you ever dying. we laugh through the cold, blood pounding steps. god, please let me keep this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
I love the haiku feel of this poem - in the moment, and the feeling of fear in loss, screams from the words, excellent expression. love, Kristin
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