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Bantu 2

a butterfly alights upon my hand an ethereal insight completes my verse BANTU an imagist couplet Each line a compete idea,the 2nd however constrasts with a complementary description or explanation or metaphor thereof

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Date: 2/21/2020 12:07:00 PM
Brian, wonderful lines _Constance
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Brian Strand
Date: 2/21/2020 12:55:00 PM
Cheers Constance,and thanks for your support to all my endeavours here.
Date: 1/31/2016 7:24:00 PM
LOVE IT.......SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:48:00 AM
stunning visual, brian... you splash paint with meaning and spontaneity!.. huggs
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Brian Strand
Date: 1/29/2016 2:41:00 PM
Thks Nette, this couplet form is very illuminating and not as easy as it appear

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