Get Your Premium Membership

Banter

He “Never say I can't?” She “Why not meet defeat admit you're seldom right. Saying you CAN is vanity and looking for a fight.” He “Don't look back on failure ...?” She “Dwell on failure is what I say; thank failure with a smile! A learning tool is what it is to shorten your next mile.” He “Good results are scant.” She “Oh goodness, where are you looking? You breathe the air where roses bloom and eat your wife's fine cooking. Taste the gift of life; don't focus on doom.” He “But, praise is less than complaint!” She “Enjoy the ACTION she says, not the praise!' You decide, what you value and all the judgments you raise. Your worth of self is what you should pursue.” He “Embrace the TRUTH with stoic composure.” She “The truth...which truth is that? Laugh, I say, in the face of those who would oppose you, tip your hat. Revelations come to those who grow!” He “Be rawhide tough and BULLDOG mean.” She “Oh God, what men don't do? Be sweet, be soft be kind I say and like will return to you for your soul you've not betrayed.” He “Defeat has no place in our repertoire ” She “It's not defeat to wish upon a star.” © Jan 2012 Charles Henderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/14/2012 12:22:00 AM
Tis quite the debate in this little spar with words. I am surprised that you seem to give her the greater wisdom than he in this battle of wits or is it one upmanship?
Login to Reply
Henderson Avatar
Charles Henderson
Date: 4/14/2012 1:02:00 AM
This was a collaborate and I wrote he and a she wrote she. A GOOD friend of mine so I didn't mind.
Date: 1/23/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations Charles, I am so happy to see you here at the top of the winners list. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2012 6:35:00 PM
smiling...loved this conversation. Congratulations on your winning spot !!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 10:51:00 PM
Congrats on your victory! I could read this he said, she said over and over never growing tired of it. This is the banter of a successful union, I say. Opposites attract!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 5:06:00 PM
Charles,,,congrats to you on a fun he said she said write! A unique entry for this contest and truly creative. Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 4:13:00 PM
haha, He said, she said, Mars and Venus, and never the twain shall meet (did I say that right) GOOD win, my friend. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 3:22:00 PM
This is a wonderful write, well composed and flows nicely, congratulations on you big 1st place win, Greg
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 1:35:00 PM
congrats Charles on a wonderful first place win for this conveersation...luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 10:58:00 AM
yeah..HUZZAH! whoopie!!! geeez!!! [doing the happy joy dance LOL] Congrad's to us! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2012 8:18:00 AM
Two sides of a coin....wow, you have said it well! Congratulations on this very astute conversation!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2012 9:50:00 AM
interesting exchange....hope is my grip of tomorrow....my husband is the die hard pessimist.....God help his half empty glass.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things