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Banned Life

Just Stepped in a world, That got some crazy curls. Don't know anyone, Have got no place to run. Gotta make a plan, To open my luck which is ban. Just come and save me from this crazy syndrome. Please! have some sympathy, On poor souls of me and thee. Gonna have a escape from here, Look there's a door way there. Oh! no it's a dead end, Have got my life banned. My first poem on this community hope you like it !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/15/2013 7:40:00 AM
Thanks alot! Your comment really gave me a new spirit to write more poems .
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:52:00 PM
great poem Hira nice job being featured
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Date: 1/8/2013 2:04:00 PM
Hira :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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