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Bandits Fishy Tale

What were you thinking of mother When you gave me that extra sardine You know they are my favourites Now…I am not feeling too fine Why you looking like that mother What you fancying to do Please don’t pick me up Or for sure will do a p@<>@.... Whewww
Penned 26 October 2017 Contest: write me something funny

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Date: 11/9/2017 11:40:00 PM
LOL - I laughed out loud, Seren, thank you - so funny and whimsical - congrats on your win! :-)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2017 2:00:00 AM
Lol thx Gregory....I laughed writing it.....Seren
Date: 11/8/2017 2:37:00 PM
Cat's meow!! Congrats!! Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2017 2:00:00 AM
Hi Sara. Thank you.....Seren
Date: 10/29/2017 5:43:00 PM
Lol...I think she smells a bit fishy as well
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:51:00 PM
Lol! Nooo don't pick up the cat! Awesome:) my best to you for the contest! xomo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/28/2017 8:34:00 PM
thank you Maureen....Seren
Date: 10/27/2017 8:40:00 PM
This is a grandiose and funny write my friend! You have delighted me by your incredible comical poem here Seren! I really enjoyed reading your amazing piece this evening! I wouldn't want to smell what that puke or poop would smell like! I'm sure it's a wonderful thing to see, leftover sardine, yuck! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/28/2017 8:35:00 PM
LOL Russell I would rather not smell either as well....Seren
Date: 10/27/2017 7:27:00 PM
ha ha ha and for once its not ME writing poop poetry Seren! :-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/27/2017 7:29:00 PM
lol was going to say puke

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