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Written: February 23, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In a grove, a feud grew, no doubt, Fruit factions were ready to shout. Banana sought peace, But his pleas soon would cease, As the orange kept stirring the route. With a temper as fiery as flame, Orange sought to bear Banana shame. He shouted and yelled, While Banana rebelled, Trying to douse the feud's flame. But Orange was relentless and mean, His anger turned downright obscene. He challenged Banana, With no sign of mana, Creating a chaotic scene. Banana, in a last-ditch effort, pled, "Let's put this feud to rest," he said. But Orange just jeered, And sneered as he neared, Determined to jam Banana with dread.

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Date: 2/25/2024 2:17:00 AM
Ahha this is so funny dr sotto! I love the clever and creative nature of your limerick! And the picture too is so appropriate for this! Especially love how youv written “ But Orange was relentless and mean, His anger turned downright obscene. He challenged Banana, With no sign of mana, Creating a chaotic scene.“ grumpy orange has no mercy. Poor banana! You can do any genre and leave us all in awe amazed! I loved the ending this is so cute! Im goin to fave this! Sending you light always
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:46:00 AM
If Orange used his loaf more...Bannana would Have been 'brown bread' whichever way you Slice it! though the limerick shines through.' Or though??? Being a variation on the term Rather..' along those lines I feel i could go further...Would that be tantemount to litteral murder? Anyway road or track..Don't despair i'll be Coming back.'
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:47:00 AM
The captca code to my last Reply was 'm a v' would you Beleive it.!!!
Date: 2/23/2024 10:05:00 PM
You have the Limerick rhythm down pat, my friend. Very enjoyable poetry filled with fun humor. Thanks for sharing the light side of poetry with us today. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/23/2024 8:25:00 PM
I wanted a happier ending than that, or at least an ending that doesn't start the last line with determined. I mean who won, the orange or the banana? Was the determination enough? Did the determination make the brawl end? Did they kill each other? Did they become friends? Did they wind up on some humans toast? My inquiring mind want to know.
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Date: 2/23/2024 4:59:00 PM
creative, clever, and funny, dear Sotto. I loved 'he challenged Banana with no sign of mana.' Brilliant! I enjoyed how you described your characters. You could be a novelist, seriously. Thanks for the humor this evening--I needed it. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 2/23/2024 2:26:00 PM
Cute one. It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. I like the picture that goes along with your work. Sara K
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