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Banana Surprise

Banana went to culinary college Yellow, firm, wanted so much knowledge, Standing up in last class, Ending up in large mass, Now was the time for all to acknowledge. Written for Sponsor Deborah Guzzi Contest Name The once was a man from Dunkirk..

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/20/2011 9:25:00 PM

Did Banana graduate with honors? This looks like a good limerick.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2011 4:52:00 PM

Thanks so much for trying I hope you try one for the kids animal limerick contest, I'll try to be of more help! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2011 8:16:00 AM

You must start with an unstressed word in line 1 start with "A banana.."then put an ' where the a is in culinary which will shorten the syllable count then that line's OK Line..all the rest of the lines are slighty of meter, I try later to advise you there may not be enough time the contest is full, you need da da DUM/da da DUM etc

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 7:49:00 PM

good luck in the contest~SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 6:23:00 PM

tickles, tickles, cecil... funny limerick that will surely be noted in the contest.. suprb stuf! :) huggs, nette