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Banana Cream Pie

Banana Cream Pie I could eat by the barrel My waistline would suffer, it's a losing battle I could eat like a fly Forego all that pie And still I'd resemble some hefty beef cattle © Jack Ellison 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/23/2015 11:36:00 AM

Cute...never mind the waistline, your humor would be fine...:D Kim

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2015 11:44:00 AM

YES! Just one big fat happy camper!!! YEEHAW! LOve from Canada!! xxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/21/2015 10:32:00 PM

G'day Jack... if its a losing battle Jack, then eat the bloody lot. You might as well be happy worrying about your waistline. Catch you - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/22/2015 7:20:00 AM

Great words to live by!!! LOL

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/21/2015 11:15:00 AM

Well it would be a delicious way to go!

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2015 11:25:00 AM

YES Jolly, old, and plump! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/21/2015 10:46:00 AM

The word 'PIE' is dangerous around here... for a stampede ensues... of Trolls and Dragon my dear... They can't get enough... as their faces they stuff... I'm taking MY Banana Cream pie... and sneaking out of here!...

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2015 11:24:00 AM

My all time favourite though is "Butterscotch Cream Pie"!!! Just saying it makes my mouth water! xxx