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Ball of Time

Rolling ball in a football court, passing from one to other Fouling some with dribbling skill, bouncing well, flying slow and fast Ball of time, oh! passing by, hit at time will celebrate best.

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Date: 5/29/2020 2:36:00 AM
Such poetic depth of thought, Jenish. An ink gem of such prismatic musing. Love and more love always.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thank you Freddie for your delightful comment..
Date: 5/29/2020 1:33:00 AM
Original and poignant which is not easy when writing about time. I often wonder if time is constant as some of us get more and others less and yet some achieve more with less and others less with more. Nights seem longer and days shorter as I grow old. Perception is everything?
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 10:59:00 PM
True..It depends on perception..So if we need a long life, we should be miserable..Thank you David for your profound comment..
Date: 5/26/2020 11:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the comparisons.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/26/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Juliet..
Date: 5/26/2020 7:24:00 AM
Lovely ball of time, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/26/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..

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