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Bal Le Ri ' Na

Nightfall's coming soon ballerina, little Baby, little darling, remove shoes, tutu Snuggle comfy settle down, preciouse treasure Slumber away night Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Sapphic Stanza Written: September 1, 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 12:39:00 PM

Sara, this is very beautiful.... xox~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 9/2/2013 9:27:00 AM

Oh I loved it Sara...though I know nothing of the form I love it....its a beautiful scene....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2013 8:51:00 AM

HOW CUTE, and I was reading it carefully and by golly, I think you GOT that meter!!!!

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/2/2013 6:14:00 AM

Hi Sara, A well crafted tender write... Regards, Ken..

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/2/2013 5:34:00 AM

The image you painted here is soft Sara. It should do well in the contest.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/2/2013 5:02:00 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2013 1:55:00 PM

I think this is one of those forms where I will always struggle trying to accomplish! But you have done an excellent job with this entry my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/1/2013 12:38:00 PM

this is utterly engaging, sara... i truly enhoyed the soft mod of this piece.. so soothing!..;) huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2013 8:28:00 AM

So cute for so a cute babe