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Baksheesh

In for a penny, in for a pound money makes the world go round. “Baksheesh, pretty lady, Cleopatra eyes?” foreign intrigue in a bantering guise. “What do you want, My Queen?” “Just for you, right here, behind the screen.” One dollar, five pounds, the world goes round in for a penny, in for a pound. “Oh my beauty, please stay, please. Come, come here, to my shop, stay for tea?” “No hassle, so honest, nice things abound!” Money, not love, makes the world go round. *Baksheesh means a TIP in arabic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 6:29:00 AM
A great Couplet here Deborah ! I'm learning Egyption culture from your trip, and I just love it, TY dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:44:00 PM
so true!
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Deborah. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:25:00 AM
Begging for tips was popular in the Bahamas as well, Deb. I LOVE this poem! So nicely written with humor and insight into the Egyptian culture. A favorite for me! And your blog photos are incredible!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:05:00 AM
Baksheesh is the same word in Indian languages meaning a tip or a present.You have picked up that word and interpreted it quite correctly, Deb. I have revised my sestina.
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:19:00 PM
That is for certain: without money, you are powerless in this world.
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:42:00 PM
hi, deb.. SOUP MAIL.. impotartant! thanks lots.. nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:41:00 PM
hpw descriptive, this one is.. " cleoptra eyes,"deb! this is an exhuberant, well-scribed piece on the theme on generosity.. warmest, nette
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