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Baking Cookies

cold, blustery day --- cozy kitchen beckons, cookies baking. 12/2/2011 for Cyndi's Creativity- Write a Modern Haiku contest.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2011 11:36:00 PM

I love that contrast of the warm kitchen during the cold day. Congrats, Kim.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2011 11:31:00 PM

Very nice haiku Kim.Congrats on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/8/2011 5:11:00 PM

congrats on your winning haiku, I can smell those cookies baking in the warm kitchen :-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2011 4:03:00 PM

Kim this is a fine haiku in the traditional sense all you would need to do is leave off the [,] and the [.] and only use 2 [--] so you keep at it!! Congrad's Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:22:00 PM

Back to this one to say congrats, Kim! I wonder what's baking today?? Mmmm :D

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/8/2011 12:56:00 PM

Kim-I like this one! Congrats. on you HM.

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2011 12:26:00 PM

Kim congrats on your win, love cookies..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:18:00 AM

what kind of cookies? chocolate chip really whet my tastebuds! great modern haiku :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2011 11:17:00 AM

Oh mmm-- I could imagine the smell of baking cookies wafting :) cozy indeed! Enjoyed this one, Kim :D

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2011 3:24:00 AM

Tasty tasty at tea time.Beautiful haiku enjoyed, my friend. Thanks for your compliment. Nice to meet you. bl

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/3/2011 8:41:00 PM

I feel the taste,Kim.Well done!Thank you for congratulations!

George Aul

Date: 12/3/2011 11:09:00 AM

My favorite - warm cookies from the oven good luck..........George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2011 9:04:00 AM

Hey, Kim,how cool. I did mine on cookie making too!!! WE chose same! Luv, Andrea