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Baggage

I tried to be nice and polite Last thing I'd do, pick up a fight Just for today, be out of sight Not a thing just seems to be right I can take your dumb, stupid ways But please stop stepping on my base Stop making me part of your case You run yours, I'd run my own race You always see my brown as beige Sick of being stuck on your own page Enough about yours, mind my rage I've had enough of your baggage

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 9:55:00 AM

Jesus :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Jesus De Castro
Date: 2/18/2015 3:19:00 AM

Thanks SKAT A for checking out my work! :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/12/2015 3:27:00 AM

Hits where you right between the eyes, kabayan. You're one brave soul to write this piece. Love your quatrain. A 7 for your first piece. Welcome to Soup. It's a community of talented, caring people. Enjoy a cuppa each day... Kim :)

Jesus De Castro
Date: 2/12/2015 9:16:00 AM

Salamat Kim! I'm happy to be part of people like me who nurture this gift. :)

Kp Nunez
Date: 2/12/2015 5:33:00 AM

Sorry for the typo. Was trying to edit but system won't allow me.

Tiffany Franklin

Date: 2/9/2015 12:27:00 AM

hey whats up I just want to let you know that your poem hits home the really good creative piece I like it

Jesus De Castro
Date: 2/11/2015 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for reading my work, Tiffany. I really dunno but angst has always been my springboard and eventually has become my comfort zone in creating my quatrains.