Bad Poetry
I've spent so much time trying to write a good poem, that I've ignored the possibility of
BAD POETRY.
Bad poetry,
the soul speaks in cat-whispers,
I meow one back,
The garden bleeds living colour,
I sprout something too, words,
and if need be, rhyme,
free as a bird-
but not as verse, remaining free;
so too the copycat found consonants
of dead poet-kings: You're lost little girl,
you're lost, tell me who are you? feign
that you know what to do, impossible
yes, but it's true you're spilling ink
and in vain, there are strangers in your vein.
And Poetry as 'pleasure' - has hundreds
of possible people lost in sterile tissue.
White paper, raped with black and red
marks, ink scars, odd words, scrawls
(hooded shawls for masked feelings),
or bad poetry, as roses are red,
violets are blue, the wind is empty,
and so are you. Hollow as the inside
of Russian dolls, but no layers,
a pale balloon above the midnight ocean.
Bad poetry can be a half-assed baloney
sandwich on 9-grain rye, I am sad,
I have a pearl in my eye, my cat is warm,
her fur is fluffy as a pillow, I love my cat,
but not enough to string two adjectives together
or hint at the existence of two, mutual,
HAIRY, souls. That's how I felt about my ex-
girlfriend, she was ummm... pretty as a rose
wilting in a 1950's prototype refridgerator
set to "cool", slow... so slow.
Hey mockingbird, can you teach me some
good poetry? Echo nature in your warbling cry,
and teach me not to mention birdsong when
the forest is being tugged like a flea-ridden carpet
right from under our feet. Habitat first, then habit.
Google "bad poetry", then read a poem about
fat people, and scoff- wow that's some good stuff.
At least it's relevant, unlike the ivy crawling
in your front yard, no one wants to hear about that!
Or a poem that sounds like someone is talking, right?
That's right Jim. I maintained a steady gaze at the
window in the den, there was a small creaking sound
and then the coroners were cleaning blood with vacuums
and lye. Uncessary, completely unessary and poorly spelt
uncomforming in letter disign, unforgivabull! ****, it's
too long, introspective, neurotic, and not child like at all:
Puffy clouds wake our family,
mom gets up rubs her eyes,
dad gets up and puts on pants,
I glide down stairs,
dreams in my hair,
marshmellows in my cereal,
and an apple like a baby in my knapsack,
we go to school and the bus seats are comfy
as my bed, but no, school sucks.
Copyright © Ph.D Volo Von Wolfenstein | Year Posted 2011
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