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Bad Hair Day

One Christmas day when a bald man called Ray, Gave his femme fatale, a silk negligée. She whispered, please close your eyes, While I touch up, your surprise. But his surprise was a hair piece toupee. 12 / 18 / 2021. For the contest XMAS LIMERICK Sponsor Andrea Dietrich.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2021 6:26:00 PM

Such a fun limerick, George. Your last line is a clever and grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes to you for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:38:00 PM

I really like the funny surprise at the end of this one. Congrats on your win in my contest, George. Merry Christmas too.

Deb M

Date: 12/18/2021 6:44:00 AM

Very clever George….enjoyed. Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/18/2021 6:34:00 AM

Depends on where he was bald…just say’n. Good one.