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Bad For Business

Today wasn’t a good morning at all for Hassan, a victual merchant in Baghdad Thirty four customers got killed by a suicide bomb A jihadist Arab wearing an explosive vest, proclaiming to be fighting against the west, ended up only murdering his own people The sun rising on the eastern horizon cast a bloody pale Screams and sobs, weeps and wails Ambulance sirens blaring ... death is a hard item to sell Innocent people shopping for meat, dairy, nuts and fruit, in a tragic transaction bought the farm The sign outside the market said half-off, it didn’t mean exiting with half a leg or one arm Somehow, Hassan in dust-covered anger survived He was one of the fortunate few to make it out alive with every body part intact, except his calm Iraqi mind; it keeps expanding and contracting in violent, kinetic convulsions a million times from such a vile, humanitarian crime Anxiety fruit flies hover over unsold crates of apricots, seething vengeance ferments the not bought bottles of apple vinegar Mass killing is always bad for business — a lot of potential repeat customers will only come to the open air stalls one time Nobody wants to buy ripe pomegranates, fresh goat milk and vintage premature dying Terrorism is bad for consumerism, fanatical death wish ain’t good for the merchant gift registry Not when buying a bouquet of flowers becomes a morgue delivery Suicidal shrapnel kisses don’t welcome tourism, foreigners eschew dying on vacation ... death ain’t an easy item to sell Prayer vigil purchases of screams and sobs, weeps and wails Hassan says business has been bad ever since that fatal, holiday dawn mourn Only rueful disaffection comes with the bagging of the cabbage and corn

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Date: 9/18/2017 8:05:00 PM
This is very well written Freddie. I was taken away reading it. Words like anxiety fruit and the very title is so good. I like how you repeat about the screams and sobs, weeps and wails. Great write.
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Date: 9/18/2017 1:49:00 PM
"Suicidal shrapnel kisses don't welcome tourism"... Amen. Fantastic pen Freddie xomo!
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:23:00 AM
Brutal write Freddie, business as usual in to many markets...
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