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Bad Feeling

Face won't let me smile Always feeling down and out Just can't shake it off

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:57:00 PM

Nice! Your little poems are so fun to read.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 12:15:00 PM

that is bad, know exactly how that feels,..p.d.

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 4/23/2010 9:59:00 AM

so strong in only three lines..niice poem!..its always difficult commenting on sad or heartfelt poetry cause as writers we can be so aware and feel so much for others that alot of poetry ,as often with mine, is a reflection on things we witness in the world...if this is your struggle you wrote about my heart goes out to you for sure!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 4:16:00 AM

This sometimes happens, Faleshia, well written Senryu! I belive reading poems on soup will uplift your spirit. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great weekend...Gert

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/22/2010 3:14:00 PM

depression. i know about this. john

Amy Green

Date: 4/22/2010 11:21:00 AM

Me likes, me understands- nice write!

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 9:51:00 AM

In my experience of life these feelings often turn out to be just the opposite Faleshia! But never mind me, not bio any way hu? Awesome Senryu, at any rate. Agape, Moses

Larry Belt

Date: 4/22/2010 9:35:00 AM

Nice one Faleshia.....Larry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 9:14:00 AM

A fine haiku with expressive images