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Bad Dope

Tick tick tick tick tick tick, tock tock tock talk talk talk. As hard as I try, this rhythm won't stop. I beg and I cry, but the clock won't comply. I have twelve different questions, but get the same old reply. And the medicine, I take, to cure this disease, just adds to the problem. Enhancing unease.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/8/2016 12:33:00 PM
ROBERT, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:05:00 AM
Robert, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/14/2015 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. very sad Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:38:00 PM
deep and sad imagery - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2014 6:31:00 AM
Very sad write, Happy new year, robert
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Date: 12/30/2014 3:40:00 AM
Very deep pen Robert! hope is only fictional dear friend. A 7 from me! I wish you a very Happy New Year and yours! : ) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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