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Bad Day

Today is a miserable day Seemingly operatic in nature But I feel it deep within me I feel this void building up inside my chest A malignant emptiness The cause of my shallow breath My tears dry in their ducts Dapper attire cannot hide the discomfort No one should see my pain For any vapid empathy towards me Would do nothing But fuel this pernicious attack on my soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2011 1:28:00 PM
Veery impressive thoughts well expressed with good images, Pravir
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:05:00 AM
yeah don't want you to wallow in self pity..... so snap out of it my friend!! LOL
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Book: Shattered Sighs