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Bad B F

Consider for me for once, please can't you. Do the things that you ought to do. You know the stuff that I'm on about. The stuff where we don't scream and shout. All I want is for you to be nice but at what cost, what's the price? My love to you, I gave it free, giving it came easily but you are just a selfish bloke, your love's a sadistic joke. I wish you weren't such a prick, give your heart a chance to tick. Maybe then we'd both smile. Make a change, don't be so vile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 AM
Wow your poem portrays a real turd, an ego manic creep, words described nought of what this bf is, if this is true and he is a BF, get out he is not worthy of you love, don't take this relationship further, for your life will be he'll even dangerous , if the violence has started already, brave write pouring out your heart to paper, blessings to you. Sueellen
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Date: 8/1/2013 3:03:00 AM
can you even live, with one so vile, and break your trust, like freshly baked bread crumbs!
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