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My owners call me horse You'd think I was barnyard watch dog Fancy that. My spot beneath a shaded guava tree Face rustic oversize shack with wide veranda Where they rock. They watch me feed Where green grass grow, where fowls and pigs stray Feasting on ripe guavas, some bounce off my back I don't mind that; not even the weight of my owner Or his wife, riding me on certain days - Wild smell of their plantation cling to me They'd groom me from ticks, and feed me well But their adopted son knew unsavory tricks He'd grin, tickling parts of me with a bamboo stick. One morn my owners stayed so long I felt out of place, tormented by and by That mischievous boy reached and pulled my tail A horse knows only one way to kick So an awful lick made him shout. He was out From across the road, one hurried half stunned. Sun at its zenith sat and watched It was I, carrying my tormentor on my back Seemed I walked a million miles So he could be seen by a Doc We walked and walked, until Rain clouds cautioned us to turn back. Day after day, I would watch Reggie at a distance Sitting, staring, staying his hands straight. ... Sponsor... Matt Caliri Contest Name...'Back To The Barnyard' Date...3-14-16

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Date: 4/16/2016 7:22:00 PM
Lovely write... I am a horse woman myself, and know all to well how horses can be teased and mistreated...and how hard they can kick!...like this from the horses point of view.
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:05:00 PM
When I lived in Florida there were mango, lemon, orange, grapefruit and mullberry trees that grew wild. The grapefruit were like small basketballs. I love this write in a horse's perspective. I wanted to be a horse as a child. And an Indian. lol Thanks so much for this lovely write. It took me back..
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/30/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thank U dear one. So you've had fun outdoors where fruits grew in abundance; I would enjoy something so special.
Date: 3/11/2016 6:52:00 PM
Iris, this is wonderful for the contest, really great, best of luck, 7 ~
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/14/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thanks dear one, have a lovely day
Date: 3/10/2016 12:04:00 PM
Hi Iris. I was born in Australia . We had guava trees in Queensland. I have been in Hawaii for many years. Guavas grow here also but I no longer have horses. SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 12:34:00 AM
Their ceremonial dances are amazing....very connected to nature.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/10/2016 7:07:00 PM
Wow. To be born in Australia, how interesting. When I lived in Los Angeles, years past, I went to Simon Rhodia Watts Towers to see Aborigines from Australia do dance and make fire with poro stick.
Date: 3/8/2016 1:40:00 AM
Loved this. Our horses would eat guavas too. Loved this story from the POV of the horse, good luck. SuZ
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/10/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne. Where are you from.
Date: 3/6/2016 1:37:00 PM
I was hooked from start to finish Iris - great storytelling and vivid imagery - especially love the horse carrying the tormentor to the doctor - fabulous poem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/6/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thanks dear Jan. It really happened in the 50's outside the city of Belize.
Date: 3/6/2016 2:27:00 AM
"It was I, carrying my tormentor on my back..." ... such empathy for the horse, but you did it in a lighthearted way. You do a great job at putting yourself in the position of the horse, while telling an amusing story. Enjoyed your poem, my friend.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/6/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Tim, for stopping by with your warmth.
Date: 3/3/2016 4:47:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this Iris
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/3/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Gail, for stopping by.
Date: 3/2/2016 8:30:00 AM
What a tremendous example of personification. I was totally enthralled by this piece. Well done, 7 all the way.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/3/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Rich. quite kind of you to stop by.

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