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Intoxicated with evergreen trees, and gentle suave kisses, Like winter I clinch every layer of the roses, and they ease my nautical loneliness, Seas of madness steering dresses of petals, I cruise in the fresh smell of the naked ocean, adorn in red, But with bitter sounds, and a dark crest of abandon droplets, Hardened by lust, I go climb on my own journey, LUNA Y SOL burning, and freezing EL TIEMPO, And I caressing my fur, Delightful filled with streams of drowning hearts, Yellow by my weaken body, like the fish taking a last breathe, Energy fastened to my soul, quickly and slowly I clutch myself back on board. Copyright©ElenaToledo2011

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Date: 4/18/2013 3:48:00 PM
browsing your first posted on soup, amazing poetry is this,,,
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Date: 12/3/2012 12:17:00 PM
This doesn't read easily, but the erotic comes through very well and with a freshness I like. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/2/2012 11:12:00 PM
I <3 this... sensual, mysterious, earthy elements... Bravo Dear Lady Elenushka
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Elenushka Toledo
Date: 12/3/2012 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Darren!
Date: 12/2/2012 7:32:00 PM
Elenushka Toledo ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
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Elenushka Toledo
Date: 12/3/2012 7:21:00 AM
Thank you! where do I see that? I will try to find it. Thank you "Linda"
Date: 11/30/2012 5:34:00 AM
Wooow .... You have posted MANY poems .... Elena, and you write very well. - (I never post more than one at a time.) Welcome you to the P-Soup, and hope you will have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. - To make comments on your poems you need to give comments. - Have a relaxing weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Elenushka Toledo
Date: 11/30/2012 5:56:00 AM
Awww!! thank you for the greeting Anne, I like your name is the name of one of my favorite poets "Anne Sexton". I will definately comment on other poems. God bless you?

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