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Back Into Existence

I try to love you from afar—but I know I can never attain again the closeness we once shared. I see your successes from a screen—and burn with pride imagining you gliding through every milestone gleaming. If only reaching to a sky could part these clouds that I create for myself. If only I had the courage to speak closeness back into existence— back into you. 3.7.2023

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Date: 2/23/2024 2:09:00 PM
Damn girl its like you wrote my diary pages.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:27:00 PM
Hi Davina! Thanks so much for the visits! <3 I hope you’re doing well!
Date: 12/13/2023 6:42:00 PM
Sounds like something lost in a way. If that is true, I am sorry for any pain. I think we all carry some sense of regret although ideally, we would not.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:46:00 PM
You would be right my friend. Thank you for the kind words . <3
Date: 9/17/2023 1:31:00 PM
Great to see you back, : ) love your poems which comes from such depth and meaning
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/18/2023 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Stephan! ~Laura

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