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I carried my heart far from home on a quest for love. Feeling like a well gone dry, I yearned to fill an emptiness and rambled to find rest. I sought solace in strangers, all my love spurned. For years, I searched faces and hopeless city streets, lonely sidewalks rolling out before me. After wasted time far behind and miles roamed, I learned my heart ached for who waited back home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/26/2015 1:31:00 PM
Rhonda, stopping back to read your poem again and congratulate your for your outstanding win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:20:00 PM
This winner reaches deep..Congrats..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:27:00 AM
This a great piece Congrats for the win
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Date: 5/23/2015 1:19:00 AM
RHONDA, Nice win...... LINDA
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Date: 5/20/2015 7:01:00 PM
This was nice Rhonda, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~
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Date: 1/30/2015 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful words about how important home is to us, Rhonda. Such nice sentiments and beautifully written. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
ah, yes, home sweet home. WE can travel the earth, but in the end, we will long for that home of our childhood. At least I one who does! You did a sophisticated construction of this form, Rhonda! Love its sentiment.
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:50:00 PM
first I had to come tell you. KFC is NOT my idea of heaven. Though I do enjoy their fried chicken breasts!! that was just an old sonnet I thought I would dig up for the humor contest. Now let me see your latest post!!
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:56:00 AM
a pleasure to read this heartfelt poem RHonda. :) i love the last lines of both stanzas!!! I never tried rispetto.. :) and i like how you did it here.. :) perhaps I could write one... :) by the way you inspired me before to write an enclosed rhyme.. :)! --olive eloisa.. :)! thanks much!!!! hugs tight and warm! God bless!
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:48:00 AM
Almost wanted to say and home is where the heart is.. Beautiful write Rhonda :) enjoyed your gem this afternoon. love and hugs Wilma
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Date: 1/28/2015 2:50:00 PM
there no place like home; this is where our spirit resides... this is a tender, heartfelt piece well crafted, Rhonda.. huggs
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Date: 1/28/2015 1:08:00 PM
Your feelings come out strong and real giving your work depth and believability. Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:29:00 PM
loved the last line... sometime we realize quite late that who/what we need is within a hands reach... nice pen Rhonda.. a 7... hugs, nad!
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