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Many thanks to a special person for helping me with the meter in my poem

Contest:In the name of love
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

Those sapphire eyes and kissable cute cheeks - I held you and I knew I was in love. The moment I'd been dreaming of for weeks was perfect, and it came from God above! Home from the hospital, how our life changed! Though challenging at first, it was worthwhile to have our sleeping patterns rearranged. What precious memory was your first smile! And now you've grown. We're many miles apart. How wonderful you are, my darling boy! Do not forget you're always in my heart. My precious son, you are my pride and joy. The loving feelings that I have for you will stay with me, dear son, my whole life through. 10~30~15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2016 5:07:00 PM

Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/11/2016 4:24:00 PM

Imagine having a mother who writes poems praising your existence. Lucky boy. Congrats, Jan. :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2016 4:32:00 PM

I couldn't be prouder of him Tom he is the most precious boy in the world and I am inspired to write poems about him:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/11/2016 2:06:00 PM

so sweet Jan, I love when you write about your son :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2016 4:30:00 PM

He seldom reads my poems especially haiku which he hates - I think he would get a shock as to how many poems have been inspired by him:-)hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/10/2016 7:00:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your 3rd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2016 7:04:00 PM

Many thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Lei Strauss

Date: 11/6/2015 6:51:00 AM

This is cute Jan! How I wish my mom could make a poem like this for me...LOL. TFS

Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2015 3:14:00 PM

I am sure she would love to write about her amazing son:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/2/2015 5:21:00 PM

Beautifully written Jan and right from the heart - good luck - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2015 3:05:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay I did get help with the meter but am improving all the time:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 11/2/2015 9:49:00 AM

This is so perfectly beautiful for your son. I will admit I got a little teary eyed! Well written flow and just amazing... -LU

Jan Allison
Date: 11/2/2015 9:52:00 AM

Thanks Laura I did get help with the meter but I am improving my skills every day:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/1/2015 11:29:00 PM

Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/2/2015 8:11:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/1/2015 4:06:00 PM

Such a lovely Sonnet, Jan, that express the love for your son from birth to adult. Lovely tribute! Congrats on your wonderful win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 11/2/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/1/2015 2:45:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. :-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/1/2015 3:34:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/31/2015 5:15:00 PM

Yes, you are growing in stature, Jan! You don't shy away from a challenge and the eagerness to better the product really shows. Well done! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2015 5:16:00 PM

I did get help with the meter Paul but am trying hard to better myself in my writing:-)hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/30/2015 9:15:00 PM

One of my favorite love stories, beautifully written ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/5/2015 2:11:00 PM

Don't try too hard, do nothing to damper your natural and creative 'instincts' ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2015 10:48:00 AM

Aww thanks CayCay I did get help with the meter I am trying so hard to make my work better:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2015 5:05:00 PM

Jan, your love for your son is very heartfelt here. A sincere and lovely sonnet!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 5:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea he is the light of my life:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/30/2015 3:49:00 PM

yes, love love this heartfelt sonnet, jan.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Nette i did get help with the meter - one day i will get it spot on for myself:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/30/2015 3:08:00 PM

A lovely sonnet for your son Jan.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2015 3:11:00 PM

I was just going to write for this contest but when I looked it was already closed.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 3:09:00 PM

He's simply the best Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Woods

Date: 10/30/2015 1:18:00 PM

That love we have as parents is unstoppable. I remember wondering before I had children, whether men could love their child as much as a mother does. Yes we can. Beautiful poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 1:36:00 PM

The love we have for our children is so difficult to explain - my son is the most precious thing in my life and I am so so proud of him and his achievements:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 10/30/2015 11:46:00 AM

Very loving words to your son, Jan. Will you share this with him? Thanks for sharing your sentiments.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 1:01:00 PM

I will skype him and let him read it in his own time he is very busy with university assignments at the moment:-) hugs jan xx

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/30/2015 11:18:00 AM

Hey Jan, a wonderful tribute to your son. I don't know a feeling quite like a mother's love for her children. This is so beautiful. Be Blessed, Neva

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 11:23:00 AM

It is the best feeling in the world Neva:-) hugs Jan xx

Kathie Shank

Date: 10/30/2015 11:15:00 AM

There's nothing better than that. Beautiful testament to your love.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 11:22:00 AM

Having my son is the BEST thing that has happened in my life:-) hugs jan xx