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Baby???

Baby, it's rainin I've gone out and put myself in the rain what do you think think of this thunder you scared? not me I put it around my neck put it where it should be but I would really I would really like it If you would come and and just get me ok, I'm scared and hungry mostly scared come get me Baby???

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Date: 6/12/2008 12:40:00 AM
what i am reading into this makes me very, very, very... nervous.
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Date: 6/9/2008 7:38:00 PM
I love this read and how the poem flowed. I like when a poet can write wqithout thinking about periods and all the other conventions that goes with writing, just let it flow baby..and you did.
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