Baboozled

You have neglected me Rejected me Disrespected me And not even left a name for me A lost identity Which is what I have feared A mirage of promised prospective All the while I was deceived Of things I would never receive I am betrayed And yet I am still afraid Of a life without you And what happens next I don't have a clue I remember an era of time When loving you was true Now it is time to move to someone new You have rejected me, neglected me, and disrespected me Now I have no thought Of what comes next for me

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/6/2018 1:21:00 PM

Great poem, Amber. What funny creatures we are to cling to people who hurt us when around the corner are others who will treasure us for who we truly are.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2018 11:24:00 AM

Amber, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2018 5:20:00 PM

Great first poem Amber.. Welcome to poetry soup..

Amber Moultry-Harrison
Date: 1/18/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much!!!