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Babies Unborn

I raise my voice and rage a fight for little children trashed and thrown. Sweet little coos and burps never heard, the printed mittens never sewn. These tiny children wanted to play, and be held and cradled so near. To hear Mommy say,” I cherish you”, and lullabies to wipe dark night’s fear. Their marble eyes never touched the sun, never touched a rubber ducky in soapy arms. Never had a chance to shriek those circus smiles, or twiddle Grandpa’s warm violin thumbs . Their tiny breaths chopped in a moment, with pierce of the sharp metal they expired. Were they able to shout silent screams? Or trapped in a cocoon where they can’t hide. Their pink little fingers stopped squirming, Heart beats blocked fading black and blue, The luster of many decades of unlived joy gone. Is this the most convenient thing to do? And there go more of abrupt conceptions, Unborn babies are gifts from God to behold. The love for children has no need for shame, for guilt As news of birth is the greatest wonder ever told. ...... ........ . Contest of Scribe Marlon: Unborn Babies Dream By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/17/2012 7:00:00 PM
Wow! This is really marvelous! My big congratulations on your first win, Nette! love/hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:30:00 AM
This is so touching and calls for heart-searching. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:51:00 AM
Many congrats Nette on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:27:00 PM
BIG BIG Congratulations on your win friend Nette. so emotional..so deep. hugs! **Maria**
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:36:00 PM
Hi Nette, you write with such beauty, however I dare not voice my opinion about abortion for fear of offending people, but I will say I have witnessed what happens when babies are brought into the world unwanted and uncared for, too many times. Only the babies pay the price of abuse. congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:27:00 PM
Nette, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:07:00 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON SWEET SUCCESS WITH THIS BRILLIANT WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN .. ELEGANT PERFECTION ..
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Date: 3/15/2012 5:10:00 PM
wow, I love how you wrote on this topic, Nette. a very well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/15/2012 5:10:00 PM
that was a good comment Debs said below mine too.
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Date: 3/15/2012 4:15:00 PM
Education is the only help for all this horror yet Victorian sensibilities and the morality of churches who do not wish to feed, cloth, shelter or parent those they wish to save are at fault too. So much fault too little effort in an over populated world to do anything constructive..about it! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Frank H's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:11:00 AM
wow.......very touching.......and for a just cause....Nette congrats on the brave theme and placement in the contest..........~sashi
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations nette a fabulous win xx
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:51:00 AM
congrats Nedtte luv on a superb second place win for this tremendous expression for the contest luv.. always awesome ..
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Nette for all our babe friends in their wombs. very well written and God bless you and yours.
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:35:00 PM
Amazing how some think that because there are some babies that are not properly taken care of (A common line) that it is better to kill more in the womb. We are talking about children here. Looking on the average of one million a year being killed by abortion, a verbal engineering of the word murder, in the US alone since 1973. That is alot of beautiful children destroyed for excuses we somehow think are more important than the children. Congratulations on the # 1 place in my favs, Nette : )
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Date: 9/22/2011 11:35:00 AM
I wont touch the emotive topic of abortion....just the quality of the poetry..........of course you knew that i would love "violin thumbs" and "greatest annunciation"......and let me say... if it had entered and wasnt in first place it would have been a sham competition...........as it is, I see glaring irregularities in the quality of the top 10 "winners" --unusual for Debs........so...well written, young Netski oh...and...can I just say "yoga shmoga " L O L
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:28:00 AM
:-( Nette-- an amazing write that really shook me up. Though I know this is about abortion, the first stanza's made me think of my own lost baby due to a miscarriage. Both ways, this works. The twiddling thumbs line had me wiping my eyes. Again, you've created something beautiful out of something ugly. As I get older, my world becomes less black and white and more and more gray. I can not imagine to be a raped 14 year old and or to find out my baby has Trisomy 18 and will die in days of birth..
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Date: 9/21/2011 4:20:00 PM
I have really enjoyed the read of your words Nette..
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:32:00 PM
truly touching and sensitive poetry Nette luv.. we gave our best with our contest entries luv.. kudos on this write .. moving amongst the raindrops today..oh...
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Date: 9/21/2011 10:57:00 AM
What a tremendous write nette...on a sensitive subject matter as well! But you so eloquently put it together! This is a well written poem!!
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Date: 9/21/2011 10:10:00 AM
You r arguably right, nette, but your lines are unarguably captivating, luv, jag
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Date: 9/21/2011 9:33:00 AM
You have addressed a very controversial topic nette and though this choice would never be mine, I see a world which can not take care properly of the GIFTS/children they are already given and a military/capitaliztic streak in man that uses unwanted children as cannon foder..tough and important thoughts nette thanks for the effort..next time soup mail me and I will increase the number of entries so yours can get in [I will do this always when asked] light & love
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