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Between rainfall and the glint of night pearls enchanting is air, a minty cologne where toes go barefoot to wade and unfurl into a pour of lips glowingly sewn. Touches ripen the aftertaste of dew catching a stardust with beguiled ardor heady the flight of promises renewed even the mist hums an intimate lore drenched in words,”You are my forevermore…” Regina Riddle's Romantic Acrostics 10/8/1014

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/12/2014 9:08:00 AM

Romantic. Your images are intoxicating.

Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 5:35:00 PM

Love reading your poetry Nette, this is no exception. Well done

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/9/2014 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations and thank you for entering. I always appreciate your poetry. Love and prayers, Gina

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2014 11:43:00 AM

no matter the subject nette you never fail to enlighten us all with your poetry..this a prime example...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 10:01:00 AM

Lovely write on romance, nette, congrats on the win

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/9/2014 8:33:00 AM

Your romantic Acrostic is almost magical Nette, congratulations on your win.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/9/2014 2:16:00 AM

Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/9/2014 1:40:00 AM

Romance rich in the soft air of love's humming dare...amazing how we yearn to be captured yet free in love Nette. You have created an environment of enchanting wilderness, and touch of smooth mystery. " Touches ripen the aftertaste of dew..." a sensuous spell! J.A.B.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 9:19:00 PM

Very intricate, a beautiful use of words, bold imagery and romantic ideals. Congratulations on your win.

David Mohn

Date: 10/8/2014 8:55:00 PM

bewitched am I by the life in and around your words...congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 4:04:00 PM

ooh la la. VERY nice one you did. Glad to see it now as I peruse the winners' list. The ending was fantastic.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 11:04:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations - I would still love to hear those final words said to me - perhaps one day in my dreams! :-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2014 7:41:00 PM

Indeed bewitched by this romantic acrostic dear Nette.I love those night pearls..Awesome.

Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 10/7/2014 6:08:00 PM

Very nice poem.

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/7/2014 5:54:00 PM

I love reading your poetry , your poems always have character and flavor, without your name I can tell if its a poem you have written..another beautiful poem and I'm not a fan of acrostics

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2014 5:34:00 PM

A splendid Acrostic for the contest Nette. Your last line is a showstopper!#7

Tim Smith

Date: 10/7/2014 5:20:00 PM

You carried me along then just melted me with the final line....so romantic...hugs Tim

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/7/2014 5:08:00 PM

Nette, A quite enchanting acrostic here. Your imagery is great and the ending with "You are my forevermore," is marvelous. This one's a "7," and I hope you win the contest here. Best Wishes, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 5:07:00 PM

Wow - oh how I would love to hear those final words myself :-) Wonderful romantic acrostic - good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx