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Azure Sea and Its Untiring Waves

A serene summer evening Brimming with beauty, the shore was panoramic, Caressed gently by silvery waves Dancing to the tune of soft cool wind. The Ebb and flow of the waves so rhythmic, Following one another like kids running in a row, Gleefully holding hands. The sea gleamed in Hues of azure blue: greeting me warmly. In a moment so dreamy, my mind leaped for Joy - as I stood by the shore, the waves Kissed my feet, the cool water tickling my toes. Listening to its murmur, I stood there amazed at the Myriad of thoughts the azure blue evokes. Nothing but a pulsating harmony of blue did I see - Oh! the humming of the waves so enthralling and Peaceful, as if answering all the Queries in my mind. The sea in her Robes of cerulean blue appeared to be So poised and placid. Her dainty balletic Twirls were graceful: an alluring elegant blue Under the glorious sky that is a Velvet of purple and pink now as the sun was setting. Waves gurgled a symphony - soothing my mind like a Xylophone's music. Far out at the sea I saw a Yacht bobbing up and down the waves and a gentle Zephyr whispered goodbye into my ears as I started to leave for home.

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Date: 7/29/2022 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium place in Mark's contest Anitha. Your personification of the sea wrapped up in this difficult form is a great achievement. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/28/2022 7:49:00 AM
It is not an easy task to create an Abecedarian so that it makes sense, but you have achieved the goal. Congratulations on your placement in mile 9, Anitha.
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Date: 7/28/2022 12:16:00 AM
I had enjoyed this poem much during the first time I read it ! Happy you have earned a podium win in the Marathon contest ! Congratulations, dear Ani...
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Date: 7/27/2022 1:49:00 PM
Back with Congratulation on this "New" win. A Wonderful Write. Have a Blessed Day Writing Away..................
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/27/2022 11:16:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Paula for the visit and the congratulations... You too have a blessed day dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 7/27/2022 11:17:00 AM
Hi, Anitha, I don't think we've met before, but I love your abecedarian poem! How nicely it ebbs and flows like the "Ebb and flow of the waves so rhythmic" referred to in your poem. I know it's difficult to accomplish this when using this poetry form. The poem likewise visually ebbs and flows too! Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 9 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 10 has already started!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/27/2022 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Mark for such an inspiring contest and my placement. I wrote this for a previous interesting and inspiring contest of sponsor Constance La France... Am glad you liked my poem... Thank you once more for your appreciation of my Abecedarian poem... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 7/27/2022 10:59:00 AM
wow, Way to go, Anitha. EXECELLENT WiN. Hurry!!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/27/2022 11:11:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Ria... Least expeacted this win... Thank you SO VERY much my dear mentor for supporting me ALWAYS and for being a great inspiration for me in poetry... Big hugs sweet friend... ~ Ani
Date: 7/27/2022 10:11:00 AM
Dearest Ani, it is such a delight to return to this poem of graceful beauty. I so enjoyed taking this exquisite journey to the azure sea with you once again. Simply breathtaking! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. It's an honor to share the podium with you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 7/27/2022 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Susan... Much appreciate your visit and inspiring kind words about my poem... I didn't expect this and it's my honor, in fact, to share the podium with you and other poets... Have a great blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 12/29/2021 11:22:00 AM
I applaud your exquisite smooth flowing poem, delivered in a form which many find hard to accomplish, Anitha. ~ Congratulations on your top placement in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/28/2021 1:10:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your First Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with this wonderful dreamy poem, I love your quote too ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/29/2021 2:30:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much for such an interesting inspiring contest and my placement.. Enjoyed as always writing for this.. Am happy you loved my quote... Friendship and hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 12/23/2021 6:45:00 PM
Dear Ani, your skillful use of this poetry form is as admirable as your “azure sea” poem is exquisite. I adore the sumptuous imagery that brings me to the center of “a serene summer evening” by the panoramic shore. A splendid feast for the senses and a peaceful place for the mind. Your artistry shines, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes for a happy Holiday season.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/23/2021 6:02:00 PM
Dear Anitha, revisiting to congratulate you on your top win! It's a great poem, and an excellent use of the poetic form! Merry Christmas and A Very Happy New Year to you, and your family. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 12/23/2021 8:23:00 AM
WoW! Anita, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:19:00 AM
Back with Congratulation on this win. "Love It" A wonderful write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:08:00 AM
Great Abecedarian. Great description of nature filled scene. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/22/2021 9:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem! I see why you’re on the winner’s list!
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:06:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this--- in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2021 4:20:00 PM
Serene and peaceful are the emotions your wonderful poem left me with Anitha. Congratulations on your deserving first placement my friend. Blessings and wishing you a splendid holiday. xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2021 10:39:00 AM
WOW!! An amazing Abecedarian write. "Love It" I love the water/beach but never thought of the waves Kissing my feet.  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/18/2021 12:27:00 PM
A peaceful, beautiful picture your have painted with your words. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/18/2021 7:40:00 AM
Ani, this is an amazing creative, well crafted poem. Your descriptions so vivid i see the pictures you have painted for us your azure blue sea brings the poem to life with you true poetic talent. Well penned dear friend Hugs, blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 12/15/2021 5:43:00 PM
May your inquietudes always be quieted, your uneasiness be eased. Beautifully penned, Ani. Very special. Serenity and Peace, Gershon
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Date: 12/15/2021 7:16:00 AM
WoW! Anitha, What a well-written entry for the contest. I found it to be so calming. Each line supports one “ standing alone facing the sea”. Congrats in advance. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/13/2021 9:27:00 PM
Excellent writing, Anitha:) sure to win first place:)
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Date: 12/12/2021 11:09:00 AM
wow this is amazing, dear Ani, I bet it's a number one win. sorry I took so long to see it I owe 40 comments since the 9th
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Date: 12/11/2021 12:19:00 AM
This is an amazing write ! Your poetic prowess has to be extolled ! You are indeed so gifted my young friend ! All the best in the contest !
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