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Away In the Dance Hall

Away in the dance hall no partner in tow. I had it in my mind to put on a show. But with my two left feet trouble lay in store. Attempting the tango I cleared half the floor. Most of the ladies there just gave me a glance. When asking for a waltz they cried not a chance. Until a young lady at last caught my eye. I asked her for a dance she seemed kind of shy. But alas just like me she had two left feet. So parted company in time to the beat.

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Date: 7/31/2023 8:01:00 PM
Good one, John! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M
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John Read
Date: 8/1/2023 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Kim God bless.
Date: 7/31/2023 12:16:00 PM
Four left feet departing to the beat… quite a feat. And worthy of your top win, John. Congrats. Terry
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John Read
Date: 7/31/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Terry.
Date: 7/31/2023 10:10:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win in Jan’s contest brother John… Sis Belle
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John Read
Date: 7/31/2023 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations to you sister Beryl,it was your poem and your help,that gave me the idea on what to write.
Date: 7/31/2023 8:11:00 AM
What a fun poem John, Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Read
Date: 7/31/2023 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Jan, enjoyed taking part looking forward to the next one. hugs john.xx
Date: 7/13/2023 3:55:00 PM
Nice story.
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John Read
Date: 7/14/2023 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Miranda.
Date: 7/13/2023 12:58:00 PM
Brother John that’s hilarious and gave me a laugh, love it. Sis Belle
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John Read
Date: 7/14/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thank you for your help sister Beryl.

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