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Away I Go

My heart starts pounding and my knees go weak I can feel the blood running up to my head My adrenalin is pumping, my blood vessels retract I know what this is all about My fear is but just a fall away If I falter, I fall, without a doubt! Sweet sounds flood my saturated mind Sounds of laughter, sounds of joy Yet I know I cannot tell, although through this fog I must win Cheering and smiling, all look up at me I begin my story, 300 feet af bungee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 11:15:00 AM
I was about 2 six packs away from trying that one weekend. Now I'm sorry I didn't go for it. Have a wonderful day Fathima. Vince
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Date: 3/30/2009 7:26:00 PM
Strong poem, I like the conclusion, it explains the whole poem with the heavy heart pumping and etc. Superb write, with great potential and talent. Good luck with the future Fathima. Love, Sami.
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Date: 3/22/2009 8:45:00 AM
just writing to all that posted a congratulations on my poem its very nice of you all to take interest and i thank you a lot for you thoughts, hopefully you will hear more in the future, really appreciative!. thank you kyle
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:21:00 PM
Ooooooowhee ... are you ever brave ... smile ... great write here Fathima ... you took me by surprise with this one!! and I'll bet its the first bungee jump here at PoetrySoup ... LOL ...
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:33:00 AM
Yikes! Brave one! Next poem, continue please. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/17/2009 1:46:00 AM
Hi Fathima, well done rather you than me. If I did it I'd probably faint at the top. God bless. Leon
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