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Away From the Familiar

Away from the familiar There are things to stop and see That the locals take for granted, Not worth uttering a “Gee!” Honking geese above the water Where a pair of swans float by, Sprawling high schools, fields of football, Nothing built to block the sky. Singer in the supermarket, Shops with fresh, exotic wares, People going ‘bout their business At their parks and trails and fairs. It’s a treat to visit someplace Where you haven’t been before And the ordinary somehow Strikes you as a whole lot more.

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Date: 10/1/2023 2:09:00 PM
Wonderful words that pull me into your visit. I love the rhyme and the timing of each sound so perfect. Great poem Ilene!
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:42:00 AM
it's amazing how we can just ignore what is on our own doorstep or right in front of our eyes, so easy to take these things for granted. You have an ability of making the normal into an exciting and informative poem. i feel like i am by your side when i read your wonderful words. hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:48:00 AM
yes you are right and so many times we miss it.. great poem and nice to see you posting. Hope all is well with you
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