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Awareness

Oh, that steady decline into awareness We seek and we find The painful journey cloaked in darkness At times to boarder losing my mind. Suddenly light wins the battle Just like He promised it would Patience and trust made me aware Not that I might, but that I could

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 7:23:00 PM

David, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

David Maclean
Date: 5/9/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Linda for the warm welcome. I think I'm going to like it here. I look forward to reading your poems. :-D

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 5:06:00 PM

David, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

David Maclean
Date: 5/9/2015 6:53:00 PM

Wow, what a great welcome. In the book of Exodus as the Lord is marveling over how well the people of Babel are working together he said, "there is nothing they can't do together if they speak the same language." Looks like I may have found a place that speaks my language. So, I'm new at this and hope you can show me the ropes :-D I'll read some of your writing. Peace...