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Awakening Sky

As the golden ball ascends At the crack of dawn The magical sky radiates Hues of yellow, orange and red Original Poem: Waiting for Light Date: 05/31/2021 Liberum Divisa 6 Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/8/2021 1:46:00 PM
Back to fav this! A real gem!
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:49:00 PM
Hope this wins my friend - so creative, exactly as it really is! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer..
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Date: 6/1/2021 2:06:00 PM
What a stunning imagery! Superb!
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Date: 6/1/2021 10:45:00 AM
Natual Coordination.
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Date: 6/1/2021 1:30:00 AM
Lovely extract. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/31/2021 2:46:00 PM
Golden ball, that’s a wonderful imagery to the skies and colors, I enjoyed reading this well penned poem. Blessings and regards Anitha
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Date: 5/31/2021 11:39:00 AM
Hello Anitha, I like the way you described the awakening sky. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/31/2021 11:11:00 AM
Anitha, Very nice skies you've brought to life in these shades. -Richard
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