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Awakening Groggy

Eyes half glued together with sleep, Mind dragging on the floor behind my shuffling Feet. Coffee slowly percolating, seems Like an eternity passes as the body Struggles with awareness & potency. Waiting for that hot tar fuel, The folding together of cigarets & coffee. The breaking apart of dreams. That somehow like parasites devour any desire To live in a concious reality; Where everything is anything but dreamy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/17/2010 9:39:00 PM
I love your first line..."Eyes have glued together with sleep". What a descriptive image it renders. Great write. Dan C ps. If you don't have spell check, invest in a good dictionary. (Conscious) Sometimes it will make a difference in contests that are entered.
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:02:00 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Merritt. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:24:00 AM
I can relate! Well expressed.
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