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Awakening

if you follow borealis, you might hear children's laughter innocence brings us closer, our darkest corners can find light the laws of man have not changed do not travel into the valley of the snakes do not travel into the valley of the snakes your brothers before you .......saw the scorched earth the laws of man have not changed love waits until the bird with the broken wing can fly step away from the shadows, your brother needs you now! do not wait for the sun to rise, cast your light upon My children! it's never too late- to show the way! if you follow borealis. you might hear children's laughter might hear children's laughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/26/2009 6:07:00 PM
Impressive poetry. Excellent content delivered with vivid imagery. It reads like a song. I like, "love waits until the bird with the brokn wing can fly..."Very nice. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. Caroline.
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:42:00 PM
James, I love the concept of following the laughter of innocent children into God's light. This is very inspirational and shows the depth of your spirituality. Brilliant write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2009 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful write here, James ... out of the mouths of babes ... laughter .... smile ...
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Date: 8/21/2009 8:13:00 PM
Compelling, thought provoking, and simply wonderful James! I love how you begin and end with the same phrase, and repeat..excellent work! ~Tru~
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Date: 8/21/2009 7:35:00 PM
I enjoyed this one very much James, be the light, cause the eagle to lift up,a favorite for sure.Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/21/2009 3:28:00 PM
I like tese lines very much "innocence brings us closer, our darkest corners can find light..." Very nicely written my friend. Gert
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Date: 8/21/2009 7:33:00 AM
Such an inspirational piece James! If we listen, we can hear....:)
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:27:00 PM
James this poem is truly amazing - I agree with Catie its going to my favs also - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:05:00 PM
This is beautiful!
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