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Awakened Senses

Awakened Senses Aboard my boat on winding river here, with anchor dropped, all seems so calm, serene. I breathe in deep the fragrant river air; the smell of water, breeze, the scent of clean. These river smells stir up a sister sense... the scrumptious, luscious flavors of the sea; The ocean cod, the shrimp and flounder too... The river wakes my senses wondrously. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Poems That Did Not Place and More Sense of Taste ~ New Poem Concept: River Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Judged: 09/14/2015
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:43:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2015 7:17:00 PM
Hi Sara, thank you so much for your supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/15/2015 6:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra. It makes me want to sail under the moon light with a good meal.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Tammy, for your nice comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 9/14/2015 1:29:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2015 5:06:00 PM
Thanks again, Skat! Sandra
Date: 9/14/2015 3:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2015 5:06:00 PM
Thanks, Dr. Upma! I appreciate your visit and congrats so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/14/2015 3:37:00 AM
your poem is delightfully luscious in its thematic approach, sandra... thank you for joining my contest and big congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/15/2015 5:05:00 PM
Hi Nette, I so much appreciate that you found my poem worthy of the nice placement! Thank you so much. I enjoy your contests so much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/8/2015 9:59:00 PM
Fabulous write, Sandra, a 7 good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2015 2:25:00 PM
So nice of you to stop by again with your positive comments and support. Hugs, Sandra

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