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Awaken

You have given me something that is even greater then the gift of life You have given me a heart that is filled with love and knows no hate You have poured out you soul to this great abyss of a human that I call myself You have shown me that even with everything that happens I am still the one that has control over my own life Are you not the best thing that's ever happened to me? Are you not an angel that walks on this dried land I call a body? Are you never tired of the walls that I break down only to build them up again? Are you you not the reason that I am still able to open my eyes and to feel the kiss of the Sun? Patiently I have waited for death to come take me Unexpectedly you removed me from the shadows that were in my heart and set me free Repeatedly you give me a joy that is beyond all other joys Eventually my time will come but you my love continue to be my entire life

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Date: 12/21/2017 9:37:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 9/23/2016 10:50:00 AM
lovely poem Thandokazi :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/24/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thank you very much :) xx
Date: 9/20/2016 1:42:00 PM
I like it, TB...PD
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Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/21/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much :)xxx
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Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/21/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thanks :) a million times xxx
Date: 9/19/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thandokazi Bangani, well done, SKAT
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Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/21/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Skat :) I really appreciate it
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Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/21/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Skat :) I really appreciate it

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