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Awaken

Stealing, killing and all other crimes This world is going bad What happened to the joy and peace That we once had Everyone wants to blame God For our selfish and hateful ways But it is us that needs to let his light shine In these darkest days Kids being hurt And husbands beating wives Read the bible people That is the only way to really save lives Don't blame God For all this corruption Be the light in someone's dark No matter your assumption God made us to love each other But now days hate has grown We must put God back in the picture Or to heaven we will not be going Restore faith and humanity So eternal life we shall get And when we die By him we shall sit So pray for each other And put all hate aside Because in heaven with him Is where I want to reside

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Skat A

Date: 6/16/2016 9:36:00 AM

Alisha, nice to see this one again, skat

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:50:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Alisha :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:30:00 PM

Alisha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 4:06:00 AM

Alisha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@