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Awake

Thick clouds float 'pon the eastern sky A gentle breeze blows Cool and damp cobalt blue painted Is there rain in tow? The silhouetted trees sway As wind chimes move with ease A delightful morn to be alive And hear music 'pon the breeze A touch of magenta reflects As the sun kisses a cloud Blushes from the shy fleeting mass Leaving while still too proud Soon the sun will fully awake And dance with this nice day The feeling of September gale Keeping it cool to play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/3/2015 11:31:00 AM
such elegance in this write, a lovely read:)
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:34:00 PM
- A beautiful piece, dear Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 7:18:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/29/2015 10:50:00 PM
You portray the beginning of fall well in this piece. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/29/2015 1:51:00 PM
my kind of wind, easy and carefree, sara.. what a blissful read!.. huggs
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Date: 8/28/2015 10:42:00 PM
What a magical and light-hearted poem you've penned. Quite a poem to be read.... hugs Theresa
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:20:00 PM
Sara, this is a wonderfully descriptive write! Lovely and light-hearted! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/28/2015 5:38:00 PM
Sara the imagery is so wonderful a delightful calming read:-) hugs jan xx 7
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