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Awake

The kiss that finally woke her was a silly sort of kiss, a desperate sort of kiss, filled with someteen years of longing eager to escape. Through the toothy smile kisses She felt water and air and earth and fire rush through her all at once, then lingering and pulsing through her fingertips. A crazy wave of relief and delight that she couldn't quite define - she knew she wanted more of this. Awake. And she blushed in places no one could see, unapologetic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2015 4:17:00 PM
This is great Sarah....welcome Tim
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:35:00 PM
Sarah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:37:00 AM
- Hey Sarah, a lovely poem :) - I welcome you to P-Soup - Hope you will find much pleasure here with us - Share your thoughts and words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 8:57:00 PM
Haha, that is way cute! I love it! Welcome to poetry btw! I can't wait to read more of your work here! :) <3 Tash
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:05:00 PM
Sorta sweet, Sarah I like it,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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