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Awake

LIKE a demon's sleep, i could rest myself being a bird to fly for the heavens sake, i could flow the world like river itself, holding my breath upon the forsaken breeze of faith, i could let my hope awake..... like a blind sees, i could feel the world myself being a shadow to follow, where the truth take i could create the heaven like the god himself feeling the clusters of soul in nothingness, i could let the cold of pain awake....

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Date: 5/30/2013 9:50:00 PM
Jaanam, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:54:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:45:00 PM
Lovely piece! Kim
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:15:00 AM
thanks all of you, for your comments
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:40:00 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
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Jaanam Pokhrel
Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
THANK U s.k.a.t
Date: 5/18/2013 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, ... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
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Jaanam Pokhrel
Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 AM
thank you ..
Date: 5/18/2013 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:12:00 AM
Great write thanks for submitting Kim
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Jaanam Pokhrel
Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
thank you too..
Date: 5/7/2013 12:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem.
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