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Awake

I awoke just as the sun rose; You were still asleep beside. Your back was to me as you softly breathed; When I saw you there, I cried. Dreams that thread through fingers, Long lost friends that steal away. You stretched and sleepily turned to me; I asked you if you’d stay. You kissed me on the forehead, And so convincingly smiled. I took you in my arms and held you; You giggled like a child. I awoke just as the sun rose; You were still asleep beside. And when you left, I couldn’t sleep, For remembering how you lied.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/14/2014 10:26:00 PM
A sad twist to this one. Works well in poetry.
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:54:00 AM
Touching... Terry
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Jessica Vh
Date: 5/5/2012 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/5/2012 9:57:00 AM
As usual... ;-) Terry

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