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Awaiting Admittance Haiku

a gentle dew drop slides softly down the petal awaits admittance

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2011 3:32:00 PM

Enjoyed the verbal picture here Tahera, and congrats on the placement win..!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 10:08:00 AM

Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Tahera

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2011 2:00:00 AM

well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff, tahera... : ) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 11:26:00 PM

beautiful, beautiful haiku! Love how you portrayed this dew drop :) Super enjoyed this one, Tahera, congrats on your win :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2011 10:33:00 PM

Tahera! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 8:56:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your super duper win in the Haiku contes with these glorious ones luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2011 8:46:00 PM

this was so precious, Tahera. One of my favorites of the single haiku on the list! Congratulations.

Date: 2/24/2011 4:34:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/16/2011 11:10:00 PM

I was expecting some sort of exam when I first read the title but I got such a pleasant surprise with this-- very pretty Tahera :)

Joe Inka

Date: 2/16/2011 8:33:00 PM

Wow!! to me this poem speaks of water to flower. But sings of man to a woman. This could be my favorite Haiku of all.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2011 1:26:00 PM

Good day Tahera, how are you I hope you had a wonderful valentines,, stopping by to enjoy your haiku,,, nice,..p.d.

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2011 5:50:00 AM

so alluring and winsome and lovely, a beauty~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2011 4:40:00 AM

Good one..Enjoyed..Sara

John Rhinem

Date: 2/14/2011 5:22:00 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```T*A*H*E*R*A M*A*N*N*A*N¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2011 3:55:00 PM

Ah, awesome imagery, Tahera...I can picture the sun rising warming the atmosphere and the drop sliding....Lovely Haiku. Always, Annalise

Deb Radke

Date: 2/14/2011 1:04:00 PM

Beautifully written, Tahera. Thank you for all the kind comments you have written about my poetry. It means a great deal that you take time to let me know how you feel about my work. Best wishes to you. Love, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 5:35:00 AM

Am also waiting Tahera my friend and wrote a Spring poem too but just posted my Happy Valentine's Day one first.. so enjoy your H.V.D. with lots of luv.. am inspired by your lovely Haiku ..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/14/2011 5:26:00 AM

This one has me smiling this morning Tahera. Very very thought provoking and imaginative and yes ..perfectly poetic... into my favs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2011 3:25:00 AM

You haiku has a lovely image, Tahera, and also reminds me how much we all need nourishment. Beautifully stated! Love and best wishes for a happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 2/14/2011 2:12:00 AM

This is an awesome Haiku Tahera!So much you have captured in just three lines---enjoyed----kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/14/2011 1:03:00 AM

incredible lines so flowing, tahera! i like lots! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2011 9:21:00 PM

Awesome, Tahera!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2011 8:47:00 PM

A very descriptive haiku. Written very well.