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Distant space departing realms of conscious warmth Voicing reason to an end within the persons hearth A fire with pit to poke and prod dissolving spirit Harmed retreated into a place where safe The Avatar a being that searched far beyond limited view Star that gazed a return to the night in day Avatar that watches from the darkness kept at edges bay Deep under a surface of skin flushed heat A spirit that flees instead of the fight to escape Soaring the magnitude of magnetic divines An Avatar without wings that carelessly takes flight Hovering not high not low always an even around This lumen of light that is profoundly weighted Shining use of a rise up from the depths of body down The Avatar does speak to encourage the voice of sound Direction of the pointer towards the feeling of no despair A spiritual intertwining of the beings loving care Body of vapored essence that is temporarily filled By the choices lead through the heart that is felt Releasing pressures built long lasted to with stand and resist Temptation of the Avatars love that was heaven sent 'Avatar Entry' Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 12/16/2017 5:56:00 PM
Great write, Kristina,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/16/2017 6:37:00 AM
This is so thoughtful and intelligent, Kristina, and very much like the way I think (and dream) most of the time - my head spinning in a hundred ways, analyzing everything, processing ... it wears me down sometimes, but this is much the positive aspects of integral acumen and cognition. What a wonderful penning - loved this, and much of your work speaks to me. Congrats and blessings for your win! :-) <3
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:40:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Thanks for your entry and Congrats on your win, Kristina.
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Date: 12/6/2017 6:53:00 PM
Inspirational, great depth, O yes! Heaven sent! Good luck with the contest Kristina;) :)
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 12/9/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Mick! Appreciate the luck!
Date: 11/28/2017 5:09:00 AM
Such depth of perception this elevating raising of consciousness poem be, Kristina. It is the first poem of yours I've read ... very impressive existential musings. Cosmic poetry brilliance from your glistening pen. May love light your path always.
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/28/2017 11:35:00 AM
This was the first you read! Well then you have read many of my writings and I truly appreciate this being the first. It is poetically awing in a description of an avatar divine being for a contest and I loved to imagine letting my writer flow with topic. Thanks for love light that does guide me and I hope my writings guide others after reading. XO
Date: 11/27/2017 8:40:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, what a wonderful avatar that would be.. nice flowing poem with great imagery...
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/27/2017 12:57:00 PM
An Avatar just one of many in poetic vision. Thanks for enjoying the being shaped by my thoughts and words.

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