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Avalanche

Resting beneath this heavy avalanche My heart turned from summer to winter Ice caused my lips to blanch Couldn't get enough by the shudder. My feet got cold as they were exposed To season's numb disposition But my love for her didn't repose Though I was losing my recognition. Time and again, without even refrain The end was running closer to me My wicked body benumbed, couldn't feel pain Yet my heart was still yearning to thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/16/2016 8:58:00 AM
This is a very clever insightful love poem Hans! Love it!:)
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:45:00 AM
Lyrical n intense in great metaphor n phrasing wow! Soulful n of the heart matters poetically presented. Pls comment my latest poem too.
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:42:00 PM
I really catch the emotion in this one. Cold as ice! great job, my friend.
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:10:00 PM
Love it Hans.The line 'Ice caused my lips to blanch' is simply superb!
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:26:00 AM
Hans, I love this poem, well done, 7 ~
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Date: 7/20/2016 10:13:00 PM
Masterpiece dear Hasnsi!!! So deep so painful and such lovely write!!!
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