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Avalanche

what is so sad about departing no more water I let you go and wonder if I'll find your fossil in the future earth dug for dinosaurs would never know ashes a better way unless you had no choice frozen in ice felt harsh in the himalayas what were you thinking as you slid the avalanche just to wake up to a blue sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/6/2015 9:13:00 PM
Catherine, this comment applies not just to "avalanche" but to many of your poems ("a day at the beach," "flying in the sky," "a flower," etc. You have a remarkable way of rearranging words which has the effect of causing the reader to see things in a new light . . . in a different context. I commend you for that.
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Catherine Labeau
Date: 7/7/2015 8:19:00 AM
thanks for making the effort to read me
Date: 5/3/2015 10:25:00 PM
Hi Catherine! deep....cool mind of yours...jim
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